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here, beta beta beta
Oct. 27th, 2011 05:53 pmAnyone feel inclined to beta a Tintin story for me? With the caveat that it's not actually ready yet (I need to do a round of revisions first) but that I'd like to have someone lined up when it is ready?
It's set during the two "Moon" books and is currently about 8000 words but will almost certainly be longer once I've revised. It's a "how they got together" Tintin/Haddock story, not sexually explicit (Tintin does think about sex a bit, or more specifically about masturbation); Tintin is about 17 by my assumption.
Spelling and grammar aren't usually problems for me (although obviously if you do find errors, I'd like you to point them out). I'm primarily looking for feedback about story structure, emotional development, characterization, canon errors, prose quality, and that sort of thing. I don't need a super-fast turnaround, but a week or less would be nice if possible.
ETA: And I have a volunteer, yay!
It's set during the two "Moon" books and is currently about 8000 words but will almost certainly be longer once I've revised. It's a "how they got together" Tintin/Haddock story, not sexually explicit (Tintin does think about sex a bit, or more specifically about masturbation); Tintin is about 17 by my assumption.
Spelling and grammar aren't usually problems for me (although obviously if you do find errors, I'd like you to point them out). I'm primarily looking for feedback about story structure, emotional development, characterization, canon errors, prose quality, and that sort of thing. I don't need a super-fast turnaround, but a week or less would be nice if possible.
ETA: And I have a volunteer, yay!
